Steve was my favourite...
Thanks for being respectful.
You got a five.
Steve was the man
No. No you shouldn't.
This was alright for a test, but I don't think you should continue with this project. You figured out how to use VCam through this, and you should let it be.
To be honest, I didn't really enjoy this at all. It was a music video I guess, but good music videos should have SOME semblance of a story. If there was one is this, I missed it. It was just a bunch of little animations that didn't really relate to each other.
Now that you know how to use VCam, start something new and bigger that uses it.
Thanks. Your recommendation has been noted and put to use.
Python-esque, but far from being as good.
It's obvious you've gotten your inspiration from Monty Python, a little too obvious for my tastes. If it were done well, then perhaps I wouldn't mind as much. Keep trying, I guess, though try to find your own style. Copying another won't get you very far.
I wasn't copying another style i was using one. And by the way monte python actually "copied" their style from the goons who are a lot older, so get off your high horse.
Very well done.
This animation is incredibly refreshing. Your style is very unique, and it's evident that alot of effort went into this and it really payed off. It's a shame that it wasn't rated higher. I think it should have won the Daily Feature.
This was pretty great, man. Though, being the nitpicker that I am...
The backgrounds are absolutely wonderful, which on the one hand is great, but it makes your average-looking characters look a little sub-par. I also think they could have been a little better animated.
But all of that aside, the concept was awesome, I thought it was hilarious, and the voices were pretty good too. With a little more tweaking, this could be huge.
Good show. I applaud you.
I found it too slow paced, and I didn't really like the voice of the boss. Other than that it was pretty good. It made me laugh a bit during the sleepwalking gag, and the coin landing on its side. It could have been worse, but you could make it a whole lot better.
Watch the clicks of microphone hiss when the dialogue starts and stops, I only noticed it when Dan was speaking though. You should add some sort of quiet background noise to cover it up, and to make the silences between lines less uncomfortable, as I found it.
This was pretty good, I guess. I don't think it's worth the front page, but it was ok. Mildly entertaining. There wasn't that complex of a plot. Everything was drawn very simply, with the exception of the devil (which could have been a tad cleaner).
I've seen worse things on the front page though.
You've got talent, but put it to better use.
Much too short...
I think we've all felt like this at some point, and you've captured that nicely, but it was much too short...
I normally strongly dislike Clock Movies.....
...but this is a complete exception. I've never given out a five before. None have earned it, in my opinion, but you totally did.
There's not much I can say about this.
Brilliance! Pure Brilliance!
Perfect Score! (which is a first for me)
In terms of animation, I've seen this kind of thing before, but the originality with the story kept it interesting. I really liked this, but it seemed kind of unfinished, not in quality, but it just ended too soon I suppose. I think you should have kept going with it and had a kick-ass fight with ALL the little monsters instead of just having the fight with the one big one and having such an abrupt ending.
But that's just my opinion.
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